{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"44544152","dateCreated":"1319028847","smartDate":"Oct 19, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"cpelan","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/cpelan","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/wh11p2.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/44544152"},"dateDigested":1532127828,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Connor Pelan Glog reviews","description":"Dtripp I reviewed Davis\u2019s glog and I think that it was very well done and that it had all of the information needed to answer his question. He also had very interesting pictures and videos that pertained to his topic and question. I also liked that his layout of the glog and his background because it was easy to look at and it fit well with his topic. Some words of advice would be to next time to spread out his pictures and text boxes because it felt to me that it was a little crowded and that made it a little confusing, but for the most part his glog was very well done.
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\nPtalmadge The last glog that I review was Peyton\u2019s. The things that I liked about it were the fact that it was nice to look at, it answered the question for the most part, and that it had interesting pictures and videos. The things that he could improve on are he could have given more information in his text boxes and he could have given more pictures. I think that the information he gave was very good and helped answer his question, but there was not enough of it. And also there could have been more pictures. Like I said above the pictures he had were good, but more of the, would have been helpful.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"44451218","dateCreated":"1318910362","smartDate":"Oct 17, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"rtate280","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/rtate280","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/wh11p2.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/44451218"},"dateDigested":1532127828,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Ryan Tate Glog Reviews ","description":" The first glog I will review is Billy Dendinger's. Billy's glog is well organized looks appealing to the eye. The information seems legit. The pictures are good and are pertinent to the topic. He has a great essential question and a reasonable conclusion. Then video he chose was related to the topic and gave interesting information. Overall, this is an exceptional, balanced glog.
\nThe second I glog I will review is Jon Pray\u2019s. Jon\u2019s glog is colorful and the essential question is easy to spot. The pictures he chose related to the essential question as did the video. Jon gave easy to understand, factual information that interested me. The glog is well organized and put together. This is an overall quality glog.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"44314958","dateCreated":"1318707536","smartDate":"Oct 15, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"jpray230","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/jpray230","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1317343514\/jpray230-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/wh11p2.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/44314958"},"dateDigested":1532127828,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Jon Pray Glog reviews","description":"I think that Conner Pelan's glog was very good. It supplied me with relevant information in his belief that Alexander the Great was a hero. I liked the layout of his glog and the video interested me and gave me a greater insight into Alexander the Great. I do think that he could of had more information though. Perhaps more depth into his reasons that he supported that Alexander the great was a hero. I also saw some simple errors in things such as putting words together that should't be together that could of been overlooked if he had looked over his glog before he posted it. Besides this though he had a good glog.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"44314574","dateCreated":"1318706659","smartDate":"Oct 15, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"jpray230","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/jpray230","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1317343514\/jpray230-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/wh11p2.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/44314574"},"dateDigested":1532127828,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Jon Pray glog reviews","description":"I thought that Genisis's glog was very interesting. I liked the ingormation that was displayed in the video about Ramses and it helped me develop my own peronsal opinion to whether Ramses was a good Pharoh or not. I was interested to learn about the Hittites nad the battle of Kadesh. His format was very good and I had no problem searching for information and it was straightforward in giving that information. I thought it could of had a little more information and more reasons why Ramses was the greatest Egyptian ruler, besides this though it was a really good glog.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"44314572","dateCreated":"1318706658","smartDate":"Oct 15, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"jpray230","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/jpray230","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1317343514\/jpray230-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/wh11p2.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/44314572"},"dateDigested":1532127828,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Jon Pray glog reviews","description":"I thought that Genisis's glog was very interesting. I liked the ingormation that was displayed in the video about Ramses and it helped me develop my own peronsal opinion to whether Ramses was a good Pharoh or not. I was interested to learn about the Hittites nad the battle of Kadesh. His format was very good and I had no problem searching for information and it was straightforward in giving that information. I thought it could of had a little more information and more reasons why Ramses was the greatest Egyptian ruler, besides this though it was a really good glog.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"44298196","dateCreated":"1318649660","smartDate":"Oct 14, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"rmeister185","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/rmeister185","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1331224938\/rmeister185-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/wh11p2.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/44298196"},"dateDigested":1532127828,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Meister Glog Reviews","description":"My first review is going to be Tripp. I enjoyed going through his glogster. It was very well laid out and was easy to navigate. I thought it had a lot of info that was cut up into pieces which made it a lot easier to read and go through. There was good effects that really helped show the effect of the glogster. The question was good, and I think that he answered it pretty well. I thought that all of the extra effects really helped out in how it was laid out. The project over all was very good.
\nMy second review is going to be about David Browns glogster. I thought that he had a pretty good glogster with some little dis advantages. I thought that he had good links and effects. I could tell that he spent a good amount of time on his project. I thought that his information was the only thing that he did not have as much of. He didn\u2019t answer the question to the fullest of which he could have. I thought that he had a lot of graphics and effects compared to the Amount of the information that he really had.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"44298100","dateCreated":"1318649359","smartDate":"Oct 14, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"jmengel187","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/jmengel187","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1314756379\/jmengel187-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/wh11p2.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/44298100"},"dateDigested":1532127828,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Jacobbie Mengel Glog Review","description":"The first glog that I am analyzing is Davis Tripp\u2019s. His glog was interesting and factual, I like especially the link and the video provided. Also the information inside the text boxes was very factual and not too lengthy. The only real problems that I saw were a few grammatical errors. Next time I would recommend re-reading your paragraphs and word choice because there were some pretty obvious errors. All in all I think that the glog is very detailed and deserves a good grade, almost everything in the glog was factual and grabbed my attention rather easily.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"44298834","body":"The second glog I analyzing is Ryan Tate's glog. His was very creative and well- organized. The question is able to be easily seen and read. The text boxes are well-positioned and very informative; the font size was just right. I like the background; it really brings together the theme of the question. His animations the he chose were good; they added a personal flair to the glog. His pictures were well-selected and related to the topic. Probably the only thing I would recommend improving upon is putting a text box behind the question so it is easier to read. Overall, I think it is an excellent glog.","dateCreated":"1318651903","smartDate":"Oct 14, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"jmengel187","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/jmengel187","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1314756379\/jmengel187-lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"44297216","dateCreated":"1318647173","smartDate":"Oct 14, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"DTripp289","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/DTripp289","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1314755679\/DTripp289-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/wh11p2.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/44297216"},"dateDigested":1532127829,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Davis Tripp Glog Reviews","description":"The first glog I am reviewing is Genises\u2019. I like the background of his glog and the images he used in his glog. I also like how he incorporated videos into his glog, even though they were a bit too lengthy. He gives support to why he thinks Ramses was the best Egyptian in the text boxes, and the video about him fighting the Hittites is just more back up info that is interesting but still supports his point. The colorful text boxes and speech bubble really stand out in contrast to the background of his glog (which is the sphinx). One thing I would change is that the videos are a bit too long, so he should have shortened them, used different ones, or shown clips of them. Overall a good glog.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"44297494","body":"The next glog I am reviewing is Christian Daley\u2019s. I think his question is interesting and could be answered in many ways, given supporting information. Connor does exactly this. He gives you his top five and from there he chooses his number one. The video he shows is a good introduction, but doesn\u2019t give you any information about the emperors. Christian also has a few grammatical errors, but for the most part is consistent with his writing. I think it is good that he talked about five different rulers and why they could be the most effective. Overall I think this was a glog that could\u2019ve been given a few minutes to clean up errors and improve the overall presentation.","dateCreated":"1318647782","smartDate":"Oct 14, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"DTripp289","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/DTripp289","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1314755679\/DTripp289-lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"44294078","dateCreated":"1318640498","smartDate":"Oct 14, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"JHorwath","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/JHorwath","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/wh11p2.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/44294078"},"dateDigested":1532127829,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Joe Horwath Review","description":"Paul Liebentritt's Glog was very well done. One could say it was not as good as it should have been because it was short, but I find that being short, sweet, and to the point was better than a 400 word essay about each subject. I agree with the answer to his question, as we would not have democracy if the city-satates had been together. Over all, I give this Glog a 10\/10 for accurate information and a well answered question. This Glog is a joy to behold.
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\nDavid Browns Glog was also quite good, using a YouTube video to help explain the Lion on the arch. However, I do find it somewhat lacking in information. It is short, but doesn't teach the viewer as much as Paul's did. However, it did answer your question, and I agree with you about the answer. Overall, I give David's Glog an 8\/10. The information is good, and obviously researched, but it is a bit lacking, and could use more infromation. The Glog is great, and worth checking out. Well done David and Paul. You both worked hard on your Glogs.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"44293702","dateCreated":"1318639977","smartDate":"Oct 14, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"amorrissey195","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/amorrissey195","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1314672284\/amorrissey195-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/wh11p2.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/44293702"},"dateDigested":1532127829,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Morrissey Reviews","description":"Talmadge \u2013 Your glogster is good. I can tell you didn\u2019t do it over night. The arrows were the affect that caught my eye the most. That\u2019s cool and wished that was in mine. Constructive criticism would be too much spacing. I see too much lines or background. That bothers me deeply (maybe that\u2019s just me (this is all opinion)). The video was on topic and had some good points. It really enriched your project. I also thing the captions or bubbles are a bit too distracting. It takes away at the message. The topic message is cool but the font could be a tad larger and your picture choice was amazing!
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\nBrown \u2013 The background really grabbed me and put me in that atmosphere. The effects were good yet they didn\u2019t take away from the message. I think the video is cool and interesting. That really helped. The title is cool and the yellow caught my eye. The thing I would take from your project and use it in the future is the notebook background. Well done. However, the dark blue on dark purple was cool but can\u2019t be read by all. The objective is having the people\/readers read what you wrote. The music icon is missed placed. At the top you want a topic sentence and nothing else. When you eat at a resturante, do you see #1 (Egg Skillet) right by the topic sentence? That\u2019s what I\u2019m stressing but overall nice work and continue to work hard!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":true},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}